托福写作不能犯的错误（1）
英语课
1.结构不平行 例：I was 1 able 2 to raise 3 my TOEFL score 4 by studying hard and I read lots of books. 当使用连词将一系列的单词联接起来的时候，应当使用词性相同或同一类型的短语。
2.不知所云 例：Many companies 5 began using computers mouth.
3.段落过长,不分段,主语与动词一致问题 She are a good friend of mine that I has known 6 for a long time. 主语和动词在数方面不一致。
4.句子别扭 We heated 7 the soup in the microwave 8 for too long and the shape of the container 9 changed. 措辞过长或不清。换言之，句子显得滑稽可笑。
5.不要使用缩写 在正式的写作中不要使用缩写形式(can"t，don"t，it"s，we"ll，they"ve等等) ，而应当使用单词的完整形式 (cannot，do not，it is，we will，they have等等)。
6.关联词语重复 Since 10 I want to go to a good school,therefore I am trying to raise my test scores 11. 不能在该句的主要主语和主要动词前使用连词。
7.句子不完整 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college 12. For example, my friend in high school. 句子没有主要主语或主要动词，因为其实它应是一个从句。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。
8.不要使用get When I got 13 home, I got tired, so I got a book and got into bed. Get太不正式，意思也过于含糊，不适合用在正式的场合。应将get改为一个更加具体的单词，如become, receive 14, find, achieve 15, 等等。
9.书写难以辨认,信息不正确 I would 16 like to study in America because all modern 17 technology 18 originated 19 there. 传的信息不正确，或者让人听起来觉得可能不正确(如果确实是正确的，应当解释为什么这样，因为读者不认为是正确的)。上述例句中，all的意思是百分之百;我们不能绝对地说每一件新东西都是从美国诞生的。为保险起见，应当使用many或most。非英语单词Computers are very helpful 20 and advantageable. 尽管看起来象个单词，其实不是，至少不是个英文单词。使用这个单词的另一种形式。
10.介词多余 I would like to discuss 21 about something important 22 that you mentioned 23 about to me during 24 yesterday. We went to downtown 25 yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came 26 to the US, I did 27 not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband 28. 在表示这种意思时此单词不能与介词连用。这种情况常见于downtown，home，there，here等词。这些词语在英语中是副词而非名词，因而不能在它们前面添加介词。
11.跑题或不相关 There are many reasons 29 to buy a car, preferably a nice car. 这个意思与文章的主题无关。
12.陈词滥调 It is okay 30 for children to fail 31 sometimes. 所表达的意思很普通 大多数人都已经知道到了，因而就没有必要再说出来。
adj.能...的，有才能的，能干的，能够的
- How good and able he is!瞧他多能干啊！
- He is able to do this job well.他有能力做好这件工作。
v.提高，举起；饲养，养育；引起，惹起
- Why didn't you raise the question at the meeting? 这问题你怎么没有在会上提出来？
- He went to ask for a raise.他要求增加工资。
n.(比赛中)得分，分数；(测验中)成绩
- The score is four to three.比分是四比三。
- Her score on the test was 95.她的考试成绩是95分。
n.公司( company的名词复数 )；[军事]连；连队；客人
- We are asking people to boycott goods from companies that use child labour. 我们正呼吁大家抵制雇用童工的公司的产品。
- Several companies are competing for the contract. 为得到那项合同，几家公司正在竞争。
adj.大家知道的；知名的，已知的
- He is a known artist.他是一个知名的艺术家。
- He is known both as a painter and as a statesman.他是知名的画家及政治家。
adj.热的，加热的；激昂的，兴奋的；激动的v.（使）热(heat的过去式和过去分词)
- Metals expand when they are heated. 金属受热会膨胀。
- Substances have no tendency to expand unless (they are) heated. 除非受热，物质不会有膨胀的倾向。 来自《简明英汉词典》
n.微波
- Microwave is a time-saving cooker.微波炉是一种节约时间的厨具。
- She put the soup in the microwave.她把汤放进微波炉里。
n.容器；集装箱
- Is that container large enough to hold all the books?那个箱子装所有的书够大吗？
- Pour some more water into the container.再往容器里加点水。
adv.后来；conj.既然，因为，自从；prep.自从
- He's been working in a bank since leaving school.自从毕业后，他就一直在一家银行工作。
- I have known him ever since I was a child.我自孩提时代起就已经认识他了。
n.大量，众多；二十( score的名词复数 )；（游戏或比赛中的）得分；大量；百分数
- We have fought scores of battles in order to win victory. 为赢得胜利，我们进行了数十次战斗。 来自《简明英汉词典》
- Her five-year-old daughter likes to act up before scores of visitors. 她那五岁的小女儿喜欢在很多的客人面前逞能。 来自《简明英汉词典》
n.学院；高等专科学校
- The college drama society is going to put on a play.大学戏剧协会正准备上演一个剧目。
- I was hot on playing basketball when I was in college.我上大学时热衷于打篮球。
v.(get的过去式)得到，猜到，明白
- I just got some bad news.我刚得到一些坏消息。
- I have got far too much work to do.我要做的事太多了。
v.接收；收到；得到
- He went to the door to receive his visitors.他到门口去迎接客人。
- I like to receive presents on my birthday.我喜欢在生日那天收到生日礼物。
vt.完成，达到，实现；vi.达到目的
- It takes hard work to achieve success.成功需要努力工作。
- They will stop at nothing to achieve their aims.他们将不择手段地来达到他们的目的。
aux.will的过去式；愿，要；常常；大概；将要，会
- Why would you say that?为什么你会这么说？
- Would you please help me?你能帮帮我吗？
n.现代人，有思想的人；adj.现代的，时髦的
- England is the birthplace of the modern novel.英国是近代小说发源地。
- She's a modern girl.她是一个摩登女郎。
n.技术，工艺(学)
- There is a series of science and technology on the desk.桌子上放着一套科技丛书。
- Many people call the age we live in the age of technology.许多人把我们所处的时代称为技术时代。
v.起源于，来自，产生( originate的过去式和过去分词 )；创造；创始；开创
- The disease is thought to have originated in the tropics. 这种疾病据说起源于热带地区。
- The art of portrait miniatures was originated in England. 微型画像艺术创始于英国。 来自《简明英汉词典》
adj.有帮助的，有用的，
- Computers are very useful and helpful.电脑非常有用，也有益。
- I try to be very helpful.我尽量使自己有助于人。
v.讨论，议论
- Let's discuss it another day.咱们改日再议吧！
- College students always discuss the news.大学生经常讨论新闻。
adj.重要的；重大的；严重的
- It's important to find out what he is doing.弄清他在干什么是重要的。
- This is a very important problem.这个问题很重要。
v.提到( mention的过去式和过去分词 )；说起；提名表扬；传令嘉奖
- I mentioned it to Kate and she wasn't averse to the idea. 我向凯特提起这个想法，她不反对。
- He mentioned en passant that he was going away. 他顺便提到他要离开。
prep.在…期间，在…时候
- What did you do with yourself during the summer holidays?暑假你是怎样度过的？
- London is full of visitors during May and June.五六月间伦敦挤满了游客。
n.市中心区，市中心；adj.市中心的；adv.往闹区
- You have to be downtown in a hurry.你得赶快去市中心。
- How often does the bus to downtown run?到市中心的公共汽车多久来一班？
v.动词come的过去式
- I was surprised why he came here so early.他为什么那么早到这里，我很惊奇。
- The doctor came in time to save his life.医生及时来抢救他的生命。
v.动词do的过去式
- How many goals did you score in the last game?上一场比赛你们进了几个球？
- Why did you choose basketball in the first place?你为何首先选择篮球呢？
n.丈夫
- My husband just lost his job.我老公刚刚失业了。
- I visited my daughter and her husband.我去看望我的女儿和女婿。
n.理由( reason的名词复数 )；原因；理性；理智v.推理，思考( reason的第三人称单数 )；争辩
- She put forward some cogent reasons for abandoning the plan. 她为放弃这个计划提出了一些具有说服力的理由。
- He offered a grab bag of reasons for his decision. 他为自己所作的决定提出了各种理由。
(=okey，O.K.)adj./adv.好，行，不错；n.同意
- The play is okay,but I still prefer the book.戏还可以，可我仍愿读原著。
- Is it okay with you if I borrow this book?我借这本书你不在意吧？
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