托福写作高分技巧：如何"造句"？
英语课
托福写作主要考察大家对英文的综合运用能力，其中，对语言的运用尤为重视。下面小编为大家整理托福写作高分技巧，在遣词和造句两方面为大家提供方法，希望能帮助大家备考托福。
托福写作造句要做到准确、多样以及高分表达
1. 句型分析
英语的句型包括以下几种，简单句、复合句、并列句、并列复合句等。在托福写作中，一般使用复合句，辅以并列句和并列复合句，当然肯定要有简单句，做到长短句相结合。下面摘抄几个句子给大家认识并分析一下复合句和并列
复合句。
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
这句话是一个复合句，由even though引导的让步状语从句。
b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English, with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
这句话中是一个复合句。with介词结构中，有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释说明。
c. I think this is less than ideal 1 because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts, and therefore that might jeopardize 2 the employee’s job.
上句话是一个并列复杂句。and 连接了两个句子，是一个并列句;because引导的原因状语从句。
d. Shallow 3 writing is indicative 4 of weak critical-thinking skills, and such writing, which is often described as “sophomoric”, receives low mark.
这句话同样是并列复杂句。由and连接两个句子，成为并列句，再一个which引导的定语从句。
2. 有问题的句子的列举
分析认为，考生写的句子容易出现三个问题：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接连句，三是句子连接不正确。
1) 破碎句
所谓破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式，如分词)，或者是从句单独成句。
破碎句：She singing alone.(无谓语，singing是现在分词)
正确句：She is singing alone.
破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick.(从句单独成句)
正确句：He did not come because he was sick.
2) 接连句
所谓接连据，就是两个句子直接连在一起，既未使用连词，也未使用正确的标点符号。
接连句: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正确句一: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正确句二: Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3) 句子连接不正确
所谓句子连接不正确，就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接，这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。
不正确句: Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
正确句： Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
adj.理想的，完美的；空想的，观念的；n.理想
- The weather at the seaside was ideal—bright and breezy.海边的天气最宜人，风和日丽的。
- They promised to be faithful to their ideal for ever. 他们保证永远忠于自己的理想。
vt.危及，损害
- Overworking can jeopardize your health.工作过量可能会危及你的健康。
- If you are rude to the boss it may jeopardize your chances of success.如果你对上司无礼，那就可能断送你成功的机会。
adj.浅的，肤浅的，浅显易懂的；n.(pl.)浅滩，浅处；v.变浅
- The dish is too shallow to serve soup in.盘子太浅，盛不了汤。
- His analysis was always shallow.他的分析总是很肤浅的。
adj.(of)象征的；陈述的；n.陈述语气
- His presence is indicative of his willingness to help.他的出席表示他愿意帮忙。
- Use the indicative mood to make a sentence.请用陈述语气造句。
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