时间:2019-01-18 作者:英语课 分类:托福英语


英语课

   在托福中写作是很重要的一部分,然而,作文的开头又是决定高分得重中之重。今天就给大家介绍下托福写作五大错误开头。


  一:中式英文人见人晕
  典型失败案例:Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
  In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
  Topic 2- The population problem
  The population problem is a very big problem。 For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。
  Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
  I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world。 For example, I always chopped 1 when I go out buy things……
  Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
  Being a nice person have many advantage。 I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”。
  二:废话连篇不知所云
  典型失败案例: Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
  This topic is very interesting。 I’m very interested in talking about this topic。 Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
  修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题
  In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。
  Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole 2 source of information?
  Ok, this topic is a very good topic。 First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much。 Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games。 So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life。
  Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
  Oh, this topic is surely very important。 Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
  三:语法错误惨不忍睹
  典型失败案例:Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?
  About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right。 Because teach child is parent’s responsibility。 So we also punish parents too besides children is also should。
  四:观点模糊态度暧昧
  典型失败案例: Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
  I think this topic is very hard to say。 Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
  五:偏离主题无轨电车
  典型失败案例:Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education。 To what extent 3 do you agree or disagree with the statement?
  I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities。 To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc。 We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books。 All in all, we can learn from many places。
  以上就是小编为大家分享的托福写作五大错误开头的全部内容,希望对参加托福考试的考生有所帮助,也希望同学在考试的时候多注意哦!

[医]剁碎的
  • He chopped some wood for the fire. 他劈了些柴烧火。
  • Finish by sprinkling some chopped almonds over the cake. 最后在蛋糕上撒些剁碎的杏仁。 来自《简明英汉词典》
adj.惟一的;独一无二的,专用的;独占的
  • She is my sole trust.她是我惟一信赖的人。
  • My sole purpose is to help you.我唯一的目的是帮助你。
n.程度,范围,限度;广度,宽度,大小
  • The new race track is nearly six miles in extent. 这条新跑道将近六英里长。
  • What's the extent of the damage? 损坏的程度如何?
标签: 托福写作
学英语单词
Aluminostomy
annonaceous
anomalous Green function
ataxia telangiec tasia syndrome
axinost (or axonost)
beach slope
biker
body block
caretaker speech
CAT (control and test)
Cervulus
characteristic impedance of lossless line
coal hulk
coarse thread tap
cockled
colpohyperplasia emphysematosa
computer operating system
continuous-way control
Coral Gables
cork tree
cost-volume-profit graph
cowessess
dari
day corrector knob
disarticulating
dress-conscious
dyaus-pitars
epidemic urticaria
exhaust-valve cam
fast combat support ship
fetid horehounds
flat sector magnet
foam rubber products
fog effect
Ghaddaffi
gram centimeter
great crested newt
heartstrings
htel
hydroperoxidation
image composition
intracellulare
johany
knowlege
law of diminishing marginal rate of technical substitution
letterhack
line light source
long - playing record
lop sth off
low rental
mail stops
Medifome
michiel
moisture suction
multiprogrammed computation
musculi adductor hallucis
nitida
no laughing matter
outframing
P-Celtic
particular Churches
plesiomorphically
plumbous metaplumbate
polyphase heating r
povlsen
pre-pilot
Priargunsk
primal cluster
Primula orbicularis
projection Ektar lens
public administration review (par)
quick service
rainmeter
raveling
red whortleberry
reducing roasting
reprovingly
Ricardo, David
river valley
sapere aude
scalar flux
sclerenchymous fibre
sclerification
segment mode
setback capacity
silk throwing
spiculating
Student's t test
subdeaconry
The biter is sometimes bit.
the way of the worlds
Thrixspermum pensile
Tom Sawyering
transmigrable
triode field effect transistor
urgent-care
vulgariser
wb (wide band)
wles
zucco