2015年1月29日雅思写作真题

 　　Task 1 diagram

　　The diagram describes the production of canned fruit.
　　分析：本月第三场考试，加试题目为流程图，步骤非常多，但不难理解，描述的是如何去制作罐头水果。感谢热心网友和同事提供的流程图。该图画的也不知道什么鬼，看起来像小苹果，那我们假装它就是apple好了：)
　　Task 1 diagram
　　The diagram describes the production of canned fruit.
　　分析：本月第三场考试，加试题目为流程图，步骤非常多，但不难理解，描述的是如何去制作罐头水果。感谢热心网友和同事提供的流程图。该图画的也不知道什么鬼，看起来像小苹果，那我们假装它就是apple好了：)
　　[生词讲解]
　　syrup 1: noun[U] a sweet liquid made from sugar and water, often used in cans of fruit 糖水罐头水果常用：pears in syrup糖水梨
　　有些同学说这个单词我也不认识，那希望大家以后遇到生词都能去查一下，其实星巴克的纸杯上就有哦。比如London Fog(拿铁)里，加了vanilla syrup
　　sterlise:verb[often passive] to kill the bacteria in sth给… 灭菌，给…消毒 to sterlise surgical 2 instruments 给外壳手术器械消毒sterlised milk/water
　　Word count:151
　　Sample Answer
　　The diagram illustrates 3 how to produce canned fruit step by step.
　　It is clear that there are several main steps in this process, from the initial fresh apples to the final canned products.
　　At the first stage of this process,sweet and ripe apples are chosen and transported to the factory where apples are sorted by workers. Next, while some unsuitable apples are taken out at this stage, those qualified 4 apples are cooled in a storageat 20℃. Following this, the cooled apples are sanitized under flowing water and weighed to ensure each apple to meet the standard.
　　After being peeled and divided into pieces, the apples are mixed with water, juice and syrup to improve the flavour. Then, the mixture is filled in the can and sterilized 5 in the cooking stage. Finally, after the cooling step, the packaged cans are transported to local supermarkets and they are ready for sale.
　　分析：本文支持缺点大于优点这一观点。
　　缺点：1.去这些地方旅游会对原始环境造成破坏;2.一些国家可能会为了抢夺稀缺的资源，而发生冲突。
　　word count：265
　　Unknown natural is always brimming with seductive scenery. Plenty of researchers and travelers make trips to distant natural places, such as the Mount Qomolangma, Antarctica and the North Pole. I am of the opinion that this has more disadvantages than advantages.
　　Discover of new areas always bring some irreparable destruction. Before the South Pole is in the sight of public, it was once an uncharted territory. Since its discovery, hundreds of explorers and scientists had taken adventures to this wilderness 6. At the same time, their scientific expedition may leave some geographical 7 environment destruction there. And it is quite troublesome to make up such destruction.
　　Although travelers extremely enjoy the breathtaking natural landscape, they bring along tremendous risks. One of the most common phenomenon of travelers is producing pollution to local areas. As reported in many cases, holidaymakers have left behind tons of waste in the Antarctica over the last century. This will not only threaten the survival of many creatures, including endangered species such as penguins 8 and seals, but also cause irreversible damage to the ecosystem 9.
　　In addition, we cannot avoid the fact that untouched environments are scientifically proved to have considerable oil and gas reserves.Currently, the world fuel supply is running out in the next fifty years, and no countries will help themselves from the temptation of these fuel sources. The greed of people will drive them to drain out the resource in these regions, and by then places like the South Pole will be truly deserted 10.
　　In conclusion, I confirm that travelling to virgin 11 land will bring far more losses than gains.