09年12月四级作文预测及范文（04）
时间：2019-02-01 作者：英语课 分类：四六级写作指导
09年12月四级作文预测及范文（04）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the
topic Social Practice of College Students. You should write at least 120 words, and
base your composition on the outline 1 (given in Chinese) below:
1)各大学在假期都会组织学生参加各种社会实践活动
2)这些活动给大学生带来了哪些好处
3)参加社会实践活动应该注意些什么
Social Practice of College Students
范文思路：
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象带来的好处
，提纲第3点要求指出注意事项，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：概述大学生社会实践活动及其主要内容;分析社会实践
活动给大学生带来的好处;指出大学生参加社会实践应该注意些什么。
高分范文
Social Practice of College Students
Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social
practice activities. During the holidays, more and more students choose to [1]be the
volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical 2 activities alike 3. It
’s obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China’s
college education.
[2]Undoubtedly, college students have [3]benefited a lot from social practice.
[4]Above all, they are provided 4 with more opportunities to contact the real world
outside the campus 5. [4]Moreover, in social practice activities, students can [5]apply
their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems. So their practical skills
are improved greatly. [4]Besides, social practice helps [6]strengthen students’ sense
of social responsibility 6.
[7]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students
to participate in social practice. [4]However, social practice may bring some
problems. For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so
as to ignore their study. [4]Therefore, we should try to [8]balance the relationship
between social practice and study.
【亮点点评】
[1]平行结构。alike意为“类似的”，作后置定语。
[2]“毫无疑问”，副词使用恰当。
[3]“从…中受益很多”。
[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“把知识运用到解决实际问题中”。
[6]“加强社会责任感”。
[7]用于得出结论。considering用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。
[8]“平衡…之间的关系”。
- Make an outline before trying to write a composition.写作文之前先写个提纲。
- Draw an outline before you fill in the details.先画个轮廓，再画细部。
- He is a practical person.他是位很讲实际的人。
- Your invention is clever,but not practical.你的发明很巧，但不实用。
- The twins are so alike that I can't tell which is which.这对双胞胎一模一样，我分辨不出谁是谁。
- All stories seemed dreadfully alike,no matter who told them.看来，不管谁讲，故事都是千篇一律的。
- Provided it's fine we will have a pleasant holiday.如果天气良好，我们的假日将过得非常愉快。
- I will come provided that it's not raining tomorrow.如果明天不下雨，我就来。
- They spoke of the old days on the campus.他们谈起昔日的校园生活。
- The campus covers an area of twenty square kilometres.这个校园占地二十平方公里。
- The safety of the ship is the captain's responsibility.确保船的安全是船长的责任。
- The matter is outside my area of the responsibility.此事超出我的责任范围。