时间:2019-01-08 作者:英语课 分类:雅思英语


英语课

   一、各种前后不一致


  说话肯定前面说完了后面得跟上吧!比如:When one have enough money, she can do anything she want to do.
  one是第三人称单数,而且have应改为has,want应改为wants;典型的主谓不一致,要改写的没改写。
  改为:When one has money, she can do anything she wants (to do).
  二、中式思维要人命啊!
  中式化。比如:There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
  分析:“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outsideworld”。原本两个句子很正常,但用中式思维把两个句子一连起来,感觉就不对了,而且一种浓厚的中式乡村英语范袭来。
  改为:There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
  三、句子随意添加
  一般都是烤鸭们写完了一句话之后,咦,不对,少写了一些东西,得加上去,然后就出现了这样的句子。比如:There are many way to get the news. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and soon.
  其实也很好改,注意标点符号的使用,news后面加了点,就是句子的结束了,然后For还大写,这样后面就彻底成一个句子啦,不对。
  改为:There are many ways to get the news, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.
  四、词性用错
  这个还要解释么,大家经常犯的错就集中在这里,具体表现为:介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。比如:None can negative the importance of money.
  negative是什么词性呀,用到这里了,应该用动词:否定,deny!
  五、指代不清
  比如:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
  这个句子相当于“我是谁的谁的谁的谁”。考官看到直接就蒙圈了……
  改为:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
  六、修饰词错位
  英语与汉语不同,放错一个位置,句子的意思就会完全发生变化啦!会造成了不必要的误解。
  比如:He believe him can do it well and he will better know the world outside the world.
  分析:better位置不对啊,应该是 he will know the world outside the world better,放到最后。
  七、用词不当
  比如:The increasing use of chemical obstacles 1 in agriculture also makes pollution.
  显然,把obstacles“障碍”,“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use(不断增加的使用)”应改为“abusive use(滥用)”。

n. 干扰;障碍
  • I think most of these obstacles can be surmounted. 我认为这些障碍大多数都是可以克服的。
  • There's no formidable obstacles in the world. 世上没有无法逾越的障碍。
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