时间:2019-02-09 作者:英语课 分类:GRE作文


英语课

   增加GRE作文表现力方式 :有以下几种。希望通过小编的介绍对同学们的gre考试有所帮助,下面和小编一起来看看吧:


  一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。三、尽量运用主动语态。四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。
  让自己的新GRE作文写的更具有渲染能力,就要灵活运用一些语法和可能简单的但是很地道的表达方式。下面就为大家进行GRE作文句子技巧的介绍,增强文章的表现能力,考生们认真练习GRE作文技巧,争取取得理想的新GRE作文效果。
  一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。
  1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:
  Weak: The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:
  1) Weak: The team members are good players.Revision: The team members play well.
  2) Weak: One worker's plan is the elimination 1 of tardiness 2.Revision: One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.
  3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:
  1) Weak: There is no opportunity for promotion 3.Revision: No opportunity for promotion exists.
  2) Weak: Here are the books you ordered.Revision: The books you ordered have arrived.
  二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。例如:
  1、Poor: My supervisor 4 went past my desk.Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
  2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.Better: She compares prices and quality.
  三、尽量运用主动语态。例如:
  1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.Better: Charity has supported the organization.
  2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
  四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。例如:
  1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
  2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
  3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
  4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
  五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如:
  1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.
  2、Weak: I need her financial input 5 before I can guesstimate our expenditures 6 next fall.Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.
  以上就是小编对增加GRE作文表现力方式的介绍。希望对同学们的GRE考试有所帮助。 只要你合理地安排时间,科学的掌握背诵技巧。平时多积累,相信你的GRE写作肯定会有所突破! 小编预祝同学们在gre考试中取得好的成绩。
 

n.排除,消除,消灭
  • Their elimination from the competition was a great surprise.他们在比赛中遭到淘汰是个很大的意外。
  • I was eliminated from the 400 metres in the semi-finals.我在400米半决赛中被淘汰。
n.缓慢;迟延;拖拉
  • Her teacher gave her extra homework because of her tardiness. 由于她的迟到,老师给她布置了额外的家庭作业。 来自辞典例句
  • Someone said that tardiness is the subtlest form of selflove and conceit. 有人说迟到是自私和自负的最微妙的表现形式。 来自辞典例句
n.提升,晋级;促销,宣传
  • The teacher conferred with the principal about Dick's promotion.教师与校长商谈了迪克的升级问题。
  • The clerk was given a promotion and an increase in salary.那个职员升了级,加了薪。
n.监督人,管理人,检查员,督学,主管,导师
  • Between you and me I think that new supervisor is a twit.我们私下说,我认为新来的主管人是一个傻瓜。
  • He said I was too flighty to be a good supervisor.他说我太轻浮不能成为一名好的管理员。
n.输入(物);投入;vt.把(数据等)输入计算机
  • I will forever be grateful for his considerable input.我将永远感激他的大量投入。
  • All this information had to be input onto the computer.所有这些信息都必须输入计算机。
n.花费( expenditure的名词复数 );使用;(尤指金钱的)支出额;(精力、时间、材料等的)耗费
  • We have overspent.We'll have to let up our expenditures next month. 我们已经超支了,下个月一定得节约开支。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • The pension includes an allowance of fifty pounds for traffic expenditures. 年金中包括50镑交通费补贴。 来自《简明英汉词典》
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bellidifolin
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charging current
chesnokov
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cryptogramma acrostichoidess
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extended left-linearity
fallen to the ground
field deformation
file active
finished flour
forked joint
gaseous core
GCB
gradable opposition
gricer
hardshelled
hicks-marshall laws of derived demand
hinrichs
Hood R.
hot-livered
imbosoms
imitating
index allocation
informix-online
ingestas
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isocrotonoyl
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local protection
Mandzala
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noninfecting chancre
NOREX
novendial
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patinations
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promontoried
pseudocercospora ixorae
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pygmier
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refinder
Ribes griffithii
romine
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silicicolous
speed clutch control handle
St-Pamphile
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sulphine
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sworded
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Tom o'Bedlam
transport entropy
traveling lighting gallery
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tutelages
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weighed down
zigzag pattern Z