2011年6月英语四级考试作文预测04

     Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:　　　　

1)有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而行2)两种旅行方式的好处3)你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么?

    Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?
    ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式，提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
    根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好：有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。
    高分范文Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?
    [1]When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. [2]Some people like to travel alone, [2]while others prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Of course, everyone has his consideration for his preference.
    [4]Traveling alone, one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange his tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring 1 others. [3]Moreover, traveling alone [5]tend to bring the traveler [6]unexpected surprise, [7]such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. [8]Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. [3]For one thing, the group members can help and look after each other in the journey. [3]For another, [4]traveling with others who have same interest with, you can share costs and experiences with them.
    [9]As to me, I prefer to travel with a companion. [3]Firstly, we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in the journey. [3]Secondly, I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. [3]In sum, [10]both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one.
    亮点点评[1]“当涉及到或谈到…时”。
    [2]用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。
    [3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
    [4]现在分词短语作伴随状语。
    [5]“倾向，趋于”。
    [6]“意外的惊喜”。
    [7]表示列举。
    [8]“和…相比”。
    [9]用于引出自己的观点或选择。
    [10]“或者…，或者”。
    佳句临摩1.佳句：When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions.
    临摩：当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时，人们的看法各不相同。
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    2.佳句：Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages.
    临摩：和城市相比，乡村的经济相对落后。
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    3.佳句：Both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one.
    临摩：网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点，因此，我们应该将二者相结合。
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    KEY:
    1. When it comes to whether we should cancel the “golden week” holiday, different people will offer different opinions.
    2. Compared with the cities, the countryside is relatively 2 backward in economy.
    3. Both network teaching 3 and traditional school teaching have their advantages. Therefore, we should combine these two teaching ways.