时间:2019-02-01 作者:英语课 分类:四六级写作指导


英语课

 09年12月四级作文预测及范文(08)


Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the


topic A Food Poisoning Accident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your


composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  你的几个同学因食用了从某超市买回的食品而中毒,幸亏及时治疗而脱险。请描述他(们)中毒


与脱险的过程,并呼吁要加强食品安全。
  A Food Poisoning Accident
行文思路
  本题属于情景式命题。提纲要求描述一件事情的经过,由此可判断本文应为记叙文。
  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:交待食物中毒的背景和原因;叙述中毒的和脱险的经过;


谈谈由此引发的感想,呼吁加强食品安全。
  高分范文
  A Food Poisoning Accident
  Last month, I [1]witnessed a food poisoning accident [2]happening to my


classmates. At that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent. Though


finally they got out of danger, this accident [3]is still vivid in my mind.
  That day was Julie’s birthday, one of my classmates. In order to celebrate it,


her roommates bought a big birthday cake for her from a supermarket nearby. They


shared the cake happily. [4]However, after a while, all of them felt abdominal 1 pain,


nausea 2 and dizziness. Two of them even cannot stand up because of great pain. We [5]


rushed to send them to the hospital. [6]It turned out that the cake they ate had


expired its guarantee period. Futunately, [7]due to timely treatment, they all


recovered very soon.
  [4]However, this accident [8]leaves me a deep ponder. I think it is very urgent to


take effective measures to improve food safety. [4]Firstly, the government should [9]


strengthen supervision 3 and administration on food safety. [4]More importantly, to


those who immoral 4 businessmen, more strict punishment should be given. [4]Besides, we


consumers should be more careful in buying food. [10]Only in this way can we make sure


that no same accident happens.
  【亮点点评】
  [1]“目睹,目击”。
  [2]“发生在某人身上”,现在分词短语作定语。
  [3]“仍然令我记忆犹新”。
  [4]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
  [5]“闻讯赶来”。
  [6]“结果是,原来是”。
  [7]“由于及时的治疗”。
  [8]“留给我深深的思考”。
  [9]“加强监管”。
  [10]“only+状语”位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。



adj.腹(部)的,下腹的;n.腹肌
  • The abdominal aorta is normally smaller than the thoracic aorta.腹主动脉一般比胸主动脉小。
  • Abdominal tissues sometimes adhere after an operation.手术之后腹部有时会出现粘连。
n.作呕,恶心;极端的憎恶(或厌恶)
  • Early pregnancy is often accompanied by nausea.怀孕期常有恶心的现象。
  • He experienced nausea after eating octopus.吃了章鱼后他感到恶心。
n.监督,管理
  • The work was done under my supervision.这项工作是在我的监督之下完成的。
  • The old man's will was executed under the personal supervision of the lawyer.老人的遗嘱是在律师的亲自监督下执行的。
adj.不道德的,淫荡的,荒淫的,有伤风化的
  • She was questioned about his immoral conduct toward her.她被询问过有关他对她的不道德行为的情况。
  • It is my belief that nuclear weapons are immoral.我相信使核武器是不邪恶的。
学英语单词
2d
abstract ideas
acyesis
advisory committee on advanced television
aerial tuning condenser
afterchrome process
again-until
aloifolium
answer to the name of
appareled
artificial eutrophication
automatic identification method
babyminder
bad book
binary trees
bishop's collars
bus
capitals of tajikistan
carbamonitrile
catchdrain
clearance space
close junction
clothen
co-processing
collective-bargaining
compressive surface stress toughening
constant voltage system
crutchings
culturemakers
dadras
DC (data collection)
deferred payment trade
derivative control coefficient
desired effects
disk command
dynamic strategy
electric boat
eric clearinghouses
exertion of authority
exhausting the air in brake cylinders
filking
fire-watching
flat plate airfoil
fuu
Goa, State of
gravity groundwater
high pressure asbestos metallic jointing
hyoidean artery (or lingual artery)
hypercyclic
ice shelf water
implanter
inequality of tide
inturbidated
jack-knife rig
key ratio
knotting bill
L-C
leechlikest
Lutzomyia
magnetic -field pattern
Meadows
medium pressure burner
mimetesite
naow
norlaureline
novelries
ocular contusion
p-amino-benzoic-acid
Paranestio
partner
phacolytic
PICCs
polamalu
Qinā, Mudīrīyat
rattle at
Raym.
relocatable macroassembler
sagebrush buttercup
schedl
secularizations
sepiolid
Shansiella
Shūrestān
smart pointers
smoke haze
sodium fluoride poisoning
Spartacus
spray pit
stove oil
super-renormalizable theory
tersus
transmitter coding
traumatic fever
travel business
Trichosanthes crispisepala
unchristenlike
unsurenesses
vasospasm stage
vibr.
WS Security
Yambata
zone format