09年12月四级作文预测及范文（08）
时间：2019-02-01 作者：英语课 分类：四六级写作指导
09年12月四级作文预测及范文（08）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the
topic A Food Poisoning Accident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your
composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
你的几个同学因食用了从某超市买回的食品而中毒，幸亏及时治疗而脱险。请描述他(们)中毒
与脱险的过程，并呼吁要加强食品安全。
A Food Poisoning Accident
行文思路
本题属于情景式命题。提纲要求描述一件事情的经过，由此可判断本文应为记叙文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：交待食物中毒的背景和原因;叙述中毒的和脱险的经过;
谈谈由此引发的感想，呼吁加强食品安全。
高分范文
A Food Poisoning Accident
Last month, I [1]witnessed a food poisoning accident [2]happening to my
classmates. At that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent. Though
finally they got out of danger, this accident [3]is still vivid in my mind.
That day was Julie’s birthday, one of my classmates. In order to celebrate it,
her roommates bought a big birthday cake for her from a supermarket nearby. They
shared the cake happily. [4]However, after a while, all of them felt abdominal 1 pain,
nausea 2 and dizziness. Two of them even cannot stand up because of great pain. We [5]
rushed to send them to the hospital. [6]It turned out that the cake they ate had
expired its guarantee period. Futunately, [7]due to timely treatment, they all
recovered very soon.
[4]However, this accident [8]leaves me a deep ponder. I think it is very urgent to
take effective measures to improve food safety. [4]Firstly, the government should [9]
strengthen supervision 3 and administration on food safety. [4]More importantly, to
those who immoral 4 businessmen, more strict punishment should be given. [4]Besides, we
consumers should be more careful in buying food. [10]Only in this way can we make sure
that no same accident happens.
【亮点点评】
[1]“目睹，目击”。
[2]“发生在某人身上”，现在分词短语作定语。
[3]“仍然令我记忆犹新”。
[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“闻讯赶来”。
[6]“结果是，原来是”。
[7]“由于及时的治疗”。
[8]“留给我深深的思考”。
[9]“加强监管”。
[10]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。
- The abdominal aorta is normally smaller than the thoracic aorta.腹主动脉一般比胸主动脉小。
- Abdominal tissues sometimes adhere after an operation.手术之后腹部有时会出现粘连。
- Early pregnancy is often accompanied by nausea.怀孕期常有恶心的现象。
- He experienced nausea after eating octopus.吃了章鱼后他感到恶心。
- The work was done under my supervision.这项工作是在我的监督之下完成的。
- The old man's will was executed under the personal supervision of the lawyer.老人的遗嘱是在律师的亲自监督下执行的。