09年12月四级作文预测及范文（05）
时间：2019-02-01 作者：英语课 分类：四六级写作指导
09年12月四级作文预测及范文（06）
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the
topic Skipping Classes on College Campus 1. You should write at least 120 words, and
base your composition on the outline 2 (given in Chinese) below:
1)大学里逃课现象时有发生
2)分析学生逃课的原因
3)如何减少逃课现象
Skipping Classes on College Campus
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析该现象产生的原因，
提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生逃课现象及主要表现;分析大学生逃课的主
要原因;说明应该如何减少逃课现象。
高分范文
Skipping Classes on College Campus
In colleges and universities, the phenomenon 3 of students skipping classes is not
unusual. There are often some students who skip those classes for feeling
uncomfortable or other private reasons. [1]Besides, still some students are absent in
classes without any reason but for they don’t want to.
[2]There are two main reasons for college students skip classes. [1]First, [3]
compared with in middle school, students have more freedom in college. [4]It depends
more on one student’s consciousness 4 [4]whether he will attend the class. So those
students lacking self-discipline begin to skip classes. [1]Second, some teachers’
classes could not attract students’ interests [5]so that some students [6]would
rather skip classes to study what they are interested in.
[7]For whatever reasons, skipping classes [8]does bring negative effects on
students’ study. [1]Therefore, [9]it is necessary to take some effective measures to
reduce this phenomenon. [1]On the one hand, the school and teachers should make
students realize the negative effects of skipping classes and increase their
consciousness of attending the class. [1]On the other hand, teachers have to improve
their teaching 5 quality to attract students’ interests. [10]Only in this way can the
phenomenon of skipping classes be reduced as soon as possibly.
【亮点点评】
[1]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[2]用于引出原因。
[3]“和…相比”。
[4]it充当形式主语，whether从句是真正的主语。
[5]so that引导结果状语从句。
[6]“宁愿”。
[7]“不管什么原因”。
[8]强调谓语动词。
[9]用于引出解决办法。
[10]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。
- They spoke of the old days on the campus.他们谈起昔日的校园生活。
- The campus covers an area of twenty square kilometres.这个校园占地二十平方公里。
- Make an outline before trying to write a composition.写作文之前先写个提纲。
- Draw an outline before you fill in the details.先画个轮廓，再画细部。
- Beethoven was a phenomenon among many musicians.贝多芬是众多的音乐家中的天才。
- How do you explain this phenomenon?这种现象怎样解释？
- The experience helped to change her social consciousness.这种经验有助于改变她的社会意识。
- He lost consciousness at the first whiff of ether.他一嗅到乙醚便失去了知觉。