时间:2019-02-01 作者:英语课 分类:四六级写作指导


英语课

09年12月四级作文预测及范文(01)


Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

  1)道路事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损失

  2)分析道路事故发生的主要原因

  3)如何降低事故发生率

  Road Accidents
作文思路

  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题,提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因,提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法,由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害;分析导致道路事故的主要原因;说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。

  高分范文

  Road Accidents

  Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives.

  [3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness 1 and even don’t comply 2 with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision 3 and management of traffic control sectors 4 is a noticeable reason.

  [7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance 5 safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.

  【亮点点评】

  [1]插入语,as意为“作为”。

  [2]表递进。

        [3]用于引出原因。

  [4]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

  [5]“增加了…的机会或可能性”。

  [6]“监管不力”,weak的使用准确地道。

  [7]“考虑到,鉴于”,介词。

  [8]用于引出解决办法,表示解决问题的紧迫性,常译为“早该是…的时候了”。

  [9]“only+状语”位于句首,引起句子部分倒装。



n.意识,觉悟,懂事,明智
  • There is a general awareness that smoking is harmful.人们普遍认识到吸烟有害健康。
  • Environmental awareness has increased over the years.这些年来人们的环境意识增强了。
v.遵照,照做,应允,顺从,服从
  • She was told to pay the fine,but refused to comply.她被通知交纳罚款,但她拒不服从。
  • Candidates must comply strictly with these instructions.候选人必须严格遵守这些指示。
n.监督,管理
  • The work was done under my supervision.这项工作是在我的监督之下完成的。
  • The old man's will was executed under the personal supervision of the lawyer.老人的遗嘱是在律师的亲自监督下执行的。
n.部门( sector的名词复数 );领域;防御地区;扇形
  • Berlin was divided into four sectors after the war. 战后柏林分成了4 个区。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • Industry and agriculture are the two important sectors of the national economy. 工业和农业是国民经济的两个重要部门。 来自《现代汉英综合大词典》
vt.提高(强度、力量、数量等),增加(进)
  • BBC backing for the scheme will enhance its credibility.英国广播公司对这一计划的支持将提高其可信度。
  • Good secretarial skills should enhance your chances of getting a job.出色的秘书工作技能会增加你找工作的机会。
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Ahura Mazda
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amidefrine mesilate
artery of the penis bulb
band elimination filter
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below-knee(B-K)amputation
billabong
Bittern L.
bonnel
cacatua goffiniana
cap-case
case reporter
chuans
combined transport of LCL cargo
curney
death grips
diplopagus
distribution theory
double-sided linear motor
drangme chhu (manas r.)
epiclassic
etch cut
facing of pile
filemark
hang-type breather
harta
have no effect up on
hazen
hemocytolysis
high pressure impregnation
hollow brick
house service generator
hydrogens
in trusting
in-situ stress
ineligible commercial paper
inergetical
inferior worm of cerebellum
intertrinitarian
inverse ray theory
joint false
leedom
let along
light spot type
longitudinal plane of symmetry
low memory
lower-eyelid
luminescent petrography
Lünne
magnetic hysteresis
mail-order department
marlar
mfsk (multi-frequency shift keying)
monocistronic transcript
name translation
nation states
necesito
nephrophthisis
nonexportation
nonideas
paraplanners
peculators
pituicytes
placier
pledgor
polycatenary
prevention of thievery
put a value on
quick start
returns auger
Reumycin
room blower
sentelle
shurtleff
spectrosensitogram
speed-limiting brake
suberin membrane
submesoscales
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suture of scrotum
talk-aloud protocols
teratophiliacs
there is money in that
three fourths
time integral system
time urgent nuclear targets
toposaic
TopTOOLS
trans-activator(Tat)
twin coiler
twinflower
unsubmerged
uppercuts
user agent protocol
uterine gauze packer
vacuum electronics
ventricular systole time
weaving movement
winning coalition
xiphias gladiuss