时间:2019-02-01 作者:英语课 分类:四六级写作指导


英语课

09年12月六级作文预测及范文(28)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Attending TV PK shows does(or does not) good to young people. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

  1)现在各种各样的电视选秀节目吸引了许多年轻人

  2)为了实现明星梦,一些年轻人甚至放弃了学业,这种现象引起了许多关注

  3)你怎么看?为什么?

  【思路点拨】

  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和第2点指出一种有争议的现象,提纲第3点要求表明“我”对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述年轻人热衷选秀节目的现象,引出对其的争议;表明“我”对年轻人热衷选秀节目的看法,并说明“我”的理由。

  【参考范文】

  Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People

  Nowadays TV PK shows are
great hits in China and have attracted many young people. Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight. Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people. As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion。

  It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people. The following reasons can support my view. Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost. Secondly 1, TV PK shows can subvert 2 the youngsters’ values. They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut 3 to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work. Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。

  In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success. I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows

预祝大家在这次四六级考试中取得好成绩!



adv.第二,其次
  • Secondly,use your own head and present your point of view.第二,动脑筋提出自己的见解。
  • Secondly it is necessary to define the applied load.其次,需要确定所作用的载荷。
v.推翻;暗中破坏;搅乱
  • The rebel army is attempting to subvert the government.反叛军队企图颠覆政府统治。
  • They tried to subvert our state and our Party. This is the crux of the matter.他们是要颠覆我们的国家,颠覆我们的党,这是问题的实质。
n.近路,捷径
  • He was always looking for a shortcut to fame and fortune.他总是在找成名发财的捷径。
  • If you take the shortcut,it will be two li closer.走抄道去要近2里路。