时间:2019-01-17 作者:英语课 分类:考研英语


英语课

   要素一,开头要“亮”


  开头最好在做到开门见山点题的同时,能够做到有些新意,这样能够让阅卷人感觉到耳目一新。例如,对于英语一的考生来说,开头成败最重要的是第一段的图画描写句。阅卷人都知道学生写作使用模版,但是描写漫画的句子是无法用模版代替的。对于英语二的考生来说,第一段最好通过对比写作手法来突出图表的数据变化趋势,切忌不要简单叙述。所以,考生必须要在描写句上多下功夫。下面,笔者以2011年考研英语一大作文为例来阐述说明。
  例子1:Two men are throwing the rubbish into the river。这样的描写句子很显然不够生动,无法打动阅卷人。所谓的生动描写就是,在阅卷人没有看到漫画之前,通过你的描写能够再现图画内容。
  例子2:Lacking the environmental awareness 1, two young men sitting on the boat are throwing the rubbish into the river polluted by such garbage as the fish bone, the empty bottle and the disposable lunch-box.
  要素二,中间要“明”
  围绕中心展开论述,逻辑性要强。学生要带着阅卷人读你的文章,不能让阅卷人自己在很短的时间内自己去反复“揣摩”你的文章。所以,中间一段,考生需要从结构、论证手法、句与句之间的有效衔接做好相应准备。
  例如,许多考生在写作文的时候,通常这么来说:There are several reasons for this phenomenon。这种写作就略显笼统,无法引导阅卷人有效阅卷。修改之后成为:There are two reasons for this phenomenon. First, ---. Second, ---。这种写作虽然不是非常闪光,但是能够非常清楚地告诉阅卷人你的具体写作思路,做到“明”的效果。
  要素三,结尾要“应”
  结尾和开头一定要做到“首尾呼应”,可以让阅卷人整体把握写作中心思想。所谓“首尾呼应”,就是需要把第一段或者第二段提到的中心问题在换种方式重新阐述一遍。反复提及中心,可以让阅卷人确定你写作中心。

n.意识,觉悟,懂事,明智
  • There is a general awareness that smoking is harmful.人们普遍认识到吸烟有害健康。
  • Environmental awareness has increased over the years.这些年来人们的环境意识增强了。
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学英语单词
all-out effort
ammonia cooler
ampa
appointed member
Arouet
aseptic myocarditis of newborn
assquake
atomweight
bacchanalias
Ban Hai
be roses all the way
Beaujeu
blessed with
Buronzo
canalis carpalis
capsule assembly
Carex wawuensis
cigar-shaped
ciliopagurus strigatus
classification of waste
closing to meeting maneuver
court of common pleas
crossey
crowd-control
cuttlebones
cystosarcoma
degenerative myopia
diatectite
Diebougou
drum magnetic separator
duplex output
eliminate unemployment
empiric(al)
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fermiophobic
fine struction
flash one's eyes at
formate butyl
French Standard
game fishes
genus cairinas
geological structure
HDMI CEC
hearth plate
honours degree
idiolysin
idiopathic detrusor dyssynergia
imperia
inkfish
insatisfactorily
jus pascendi
keyword item
laser printers
man-machine interaction equipment
maximum bit rate
mistion
more replenishing soil moisture reserve
motion planning
motion-pictures
Nal detector
Nervus medianus
non-exclusion
non-linear molecule
nonulcerated
nyy
okwui
open end V-belt
passets
Phichit, Changwat
pick up and delivery service
pinch-faced
polygonometric network
prima donnas
quality bonus
radiation gasdynamics
reexhumation
replacement length
rubber paint
sadhanas
scissor-tailed
seen eye to eye
signal bridge
single-state recycle
slotted screen
snowmobiles
spam act
Spittal of Glenshee
spring of cylinder lubricator plunger
strip-searches
sudden cough
sufflations
supersonic particle sizer
surface of constant pressure
talipes calcaneus
termination and suspersion of contract
theory mapping
unsanctimonious
urnsful
user program status display
webtalk
wtb
xenotime