时间:2019-01-17 作者:英语课 分类:考研英语


英语课

   要素一,开头要“亮”


  开头最好在做到开门见山点题的同时,能够做到有些新意,这样能够让阅卷人感觉到耳目一新。例如,对于英语一的考生来说,开头成败最重要的是第一段的图画描写句。阅卷人都知道学生写作使用模版,但是描写漫画的句子是无法用模版代替的。对于英语二的考生来说,第一段最好通过对比写作手法来突出图表的数据变化趋势,切忌不要简单叙述。所以,考生必须要在描写句上多下功夫。下面,笔者以2011年考研英语一大作文为例来阐述说明。
  例子1:Two men are throwing the rubbish into the river。这样的描写句子很显然不够生动,无法打动阅卷人。所谓的生动描写就是,在阅卷人没有看到漫画之前,通过你的描写能够再现图画内容。
  例子2:Lacking the environmental awareness 1, two young men sitting on the boat are throwing the rubbish into the river polluted by such garbage as the fish bone, the empty bottle and the disposable lunch-box.
  要素二,中间要“明”
  围绕中心展开论述,逻辑性要强。学生要带着阅卷人读你的文章,不能让阅卷人自己在很短的时间内自己去反复“揣摩”你的文章。所以,中间一段,考生需要从结构、论证手法、句与句之间的有效衔接做好相应准备。
  例如,许多考生在写作文的时候,通常这么来说:There are several reasons for this phenomenon。这种写作就略显笼统,无法引导阅卷人有效阅卷。修改之后成为:There are two reasons for this phenomenon. First, ---. Second, ---。这种写作虽然不是非常闪光,但是能够非常清楚地告诉阅卷人你的具体写作思路,做到“明”的效果。
  要素三,结尾要“应”
  结尾和开头一定要做到“首尾呼应”,可以让阅卷人整体把握写作中心思想。所谓“首尾呼应”,就是需要把第一段或者第二段提到的中心问题在换种方式重新阐述一遍。反复提及中心,可以让阅卷人确定你写作中心。

n.意识,觉悟,懂事,明智
  • There is a general awareness that smoking is harmful.人们普遍认识到吸烟有害健康。
  • Environmental awareness has increased over the years.这些年来人们的环境意识增强了。
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学英语单词
accompushments
amplitude ratio-phase difference instrument
anisamide
antigedades
backbar
bashing on
bearing indication
beauvallon
boiling-water
Brevibloc
camp sheeting
candle stick
card reeler
CEW
clearing of accounts
client priority
communistled
compeed
compression of light pulse
couseranite
data flow
Dexasine
disgraciously
disprisoning
Dixonian
eat right
ecbasis
entraining plume
equity share
facultative anaerobes
family therapeutics
febris rubra
floating channel
flotation column
flys
fucko
fund remittance and transfer
gangrenous stomatitis
germylidenes
gingival separator
high energy level pile
hour-hand
human skin
impulsive neurosis
indeprehensible
indifferent air mass
insurance-relateds
intragastrically
Inverness capes
jolliment
k homogeneous grammar
kawamoto
Khvosh Maqām
lagopodous
landing over obstacle
leveraged contract in foreign exchange
Machupicchu
make sail
marine seepage
mechanical friction
midflow
nephometer
Nitropotasse
non-scene
nonlinear deformation
not good enough to
nucleolform
oletimol
ottey
P-anisidine value
phlordzinize
Ponchon-Savarit diagram
Pontchartrain, L.
precisionists
radio sensor
real-value item
recessing-tool
reduction cell
reverting
rotating cylinder (pneumatic)
sandcloth
Sap-flow
sclerospora miscanthi
scorner
secondary focusing
sell for
semi-direct fired pulverizing system
SI batch file service
snipe fish
South Whittier
stealthie
stock base
subapical initial
thomisidae
tire-pressure gauge
towell
twisting(cleland 1949)
Upper Voltans
water-sop
winter moth
XRE
zappily