英语写作辅导
英语写作辅导
纵观我国各省市的中考作文题，目前来说还处于作文的初级阶段，也就是我们常说的描红和模拟阶段。这是由于我们英语词汇量有限，所接触的英语真正流通量太小，还不能自由发挥地用英语进行真正的写作。因此，中考书面表达题常以提示性作文为主，下面就具体说说这类作文的写法。
1 .牢固扎实地掌握英语各项基础知识并灵活运用（大到句法、词法，小到大小写、标点符号的使用，遣词造句、连句成文等）。
2 .观察理解试题要求的提示内容，独立思考，组织信息材料，安排短语结构，决定先后顺序，确定表达方法。
3 .会使用英语中的连词，如 and ， but ， so ，等，使短文衔接自如，给文章润色，提高表达效果。
4 .掌握并能熟练使用各种应用文的体例、常用语、格式等。
写提示作文有技巧吗？有！
1 .认真审题，明确要求。在提笔写作之前，花几分钟时间，弄清题目提示的内容、格式、时间、环境等，以免出现文不对题的现象，造成不必要的时间浪费。审题应包括：（ 1 ）仔细阅读写作要求和提示，在重点词下划线，以引起重视和注意；（ 2 ）用 a ， b ， c 等符号排列要点，把材料分成主次；（ 3 ）确定体裁、格式和人物；（ 4 ）确定表达的时间主线——时态及其相关搭配用法。
2 .写作一定要切题，抓住要点。题目要求的内容应写进去，以保证内容的完整。对于与要求无关的内容切忌任意发挥，画蛇添足。
3 .写作必须注意格式。比如英汉信件、日记、通知在格式上就有较大的不同。平常应多读、多记、多练相关文体课本、同步练习以达到实际运用的目的。
4 .注意语法正确、用词得当、语言地道。在写不同题材和体裁时，所用的句式、时态、语言特征及用词均不同。写作时要多从交流的角度考虑以上各个方面。
5 .写作时切忌用汉译英的方式进行。在写信时，考生不要把题目中的汉语指令直接译成英语，要尽量用简练的、地道的英语来写。
6 .写作应连贯、流畅。尽量使用最熟悉的词句，少用复合句和长句，多用简单句、短句和主动句。
7 .检查时应着重注意以下内容：（ 1 ）动词的时态和语态；（ 2 ）单词拼写；（ 3 ）冠词、介词用法；（ 4 ）语序；（ 5 ）名词的数与主谓一致；（ 6 ）句意与语法的一致性；（ 7 ）标点、格式、词数等。
看个例题吧！
（ 2002 年常州市）根据要点提示写一篇短文。要求：语法正确，意思连贯，书写规范，要点齐全。词数 60 － 80 （标点符号不计入总词数）。
要点提示： 1 .上星期天上午我一直在图书馆看书。 2 .走出图书馆发现自行车不在了，只好步行回家。 3 .昨天去买车，款式很多难以挑选 4 .店主说，常州产的金狮自行车物美价廉，我买了一辆蓝色的。
思路点拨：
本篇书面表达比较简单，同学主要应注意以下几点：
1 .因为是叙述一件已经发生过的事情，所以全文一定要注意时态统一，用过去时态。有的同学在句中有表示过去时间的词语时，能注意运用正确时态，而其他情况下容易混淆。
2 .一件事情总有其发展的先后顺序，所以在叙述时一定要注意事情发展的条理，注意前后语句的连贯性。
3 .要注意词的运用，如 walk ， home ， Jinshi bikes ， made 1 ， in Changzhou .
参考范文Last Sunday morning I was 2 in the library . When I got 3 out of it ， I found 4 my bike wasn't there . I had 5 to walk home . Yesterday I went to buy a new one . There were many kinds of bikes in the shop . I couldn't decide 7 which to choose . Then the shopkeeper 8 told me that Jinshi bikes made in Changzhou were nice and cheap . So I bought a blue one .
怎么样，会了吗？做几个中考题练练吧！
1 .（ 2002 年福州市）根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须都用上。词数 60 － 70 左右。
（ 1 ）昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。（ 2 ）在路上我们遇见了一个外国人。（ 3 ）他向我询问如何去温泉饭店。（ 4 ）我告诉他沿路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。（ 5 ）他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而高兴。
提示词语： go out for a walk ， on the road ， the way to ， walk along 9 ， on the left ， thank for ， be happy that .
2 .（ 2002 年黄冈市）小明做了一个梦。他梦见自己为北京奥运会做一名志愿者：他努力帮助来自世界各国的外国朋友……在交谈中，小明让外国朋友更多地了解北京。外国朋友感谢小明，并认为小明的英语非常好。小明很高兴，他甜蜜地笑了……请你根据设定的梦境并加以想象，写一段 80 词左右的短文。开始语和结束语均已给出（不计入总词数）。
内容要求：
（ 1 ）帮助外国朋友；（ 2 ）与外国朋友交谈；（ 3 ）感谢小明；（ 4 ）小明很高兴。
词汇参考： try （ do ） one's best ， find （ that ）， heavy （ lost ）， carry （ show ， take ）， taxi （ car ， bike ）， on the way ， talk with （ about ）Xiao Ming had a dream 10 （梦） last night . In the dream ， he volunteered 11 to serve 12 （志愿列队） the Beijing Olympics 13 .
3 .（ 2002 年重庆市）根据内容要求写一篇 50 － 80 词的短文。要求：书写格式正确，语句通畅、流畅，无语法错误。
内容提要：今年四月 AAPP 要在重庆召开，外国友人受到重庆人民的热烈欢迎。外国友人说：“重庆变化很大，街道清洁，灯火明亮，城市秀美，人更美，人们将记住重庆，重庆的明天会越来越好。”
4 .（ 2002 年安徽省）安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（ the Yellow Mountain ）。
（ 1 ）位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。（ 2 ）乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时；也可以乘火车或飞机去。（ 3 ）登山便可领略其云海（ the sea of clouds ）、奇松（ wondrous 14 pines 15 ）、怪石（ unique 16 rocks ）等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。
注意 1 词数： 80 词左右。 2 请不要逐字翻译。
参考答案：
1 . Yesterday evening ， I went out for a walk with my mother . On the road ， we met a foreigner 18 . He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel . I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning 19 on the left ， then he could 6 see the hotel . He thanked me very much for my help . I was happy thatI could help him .
2 . Xiao Ming had a dream last night . In the dream ， he volunteered to serve the Beijing Olym pics . He tried his best to help the foreign 17 friends from different countries . When he found a foreign friend worried 20 in the street ， he went up to him and asked him what was the matter . The foreigner told Xiao Ming he was Jack 21 ， and he forgot 22 the way to the Sun Hotel . Then Xiao Ming stopped a taxi and took 23 him to the Sun Hotel . Xiao Ming talked with Jack on the way and made Jack know more about Beijing . Jack thanked Xiao Ming very much and thought 24 Xiao Ming's English was very good . Xiao Ming was very happy . He smiled and smiled ， then he woke 25 up .
3 . In April this year the AAPP was held in Chongqing . The foreign friends were warmly welcomed by Chongqing people . The foreign friends said 26 ，“ Chongqing has changed a lot . The streets are clean ， the lights are bright ， the city is beautiful ， and the people are friendly 27 . Chongqing will be remembered and her tomorrow will become better and better . 4 . The Yellow Mountain is one of the most famous 28 mountains in China . It lies 29 in the south of Anhui . Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners 30 pay 31 a visit there . It's not far from here . It takes you about three hours to get there by bus . You can also go there by train or by plane . While 32 you are climbing the mountain ， you can enjoy the sea of clouds ， wondrous pines and unique rocks around you . In the early morning when the sun rises 33 ， the sky looks very beautiful . It's really a nice place to visit .
- They were not made in china.它们不是中国制造的。
- The monkey made a long arm for the peach.猴子伸臂去摘桃子。
- I just got some bad news.我刚得到一些坏消息。
- I have got far too much work to do.我要做的事太多了。
- I found him at home.我发现他在家。
- The United Nations was found in 1945.联合国于1945年成立。
- I just had a good idea!我有个好主意！
- The boy had a small branch of a tree in his hand.这个男孩手上拿一条小树枝。
- Could I open the window?我可以打开窗子吗？
- I could wait ten minutes.我可以等十分钟。
- It's a difficult question to decide.这是个难以决定的问题。
- I can't decide which to choose.我无法决定要选哪一个。
- Tom's father is a shopkeeper.汤姆的父亲是店主。
- The man in gray pants is the shopkeeper.那穿灰色长裤的男人是店老板。
- Would you like to come along?你想一起去吗？
- They walked slowly along the road.他们沿着公路慢慢走。
- I remembered my grandfather in my dream last night.昨晚我梦见了我的外祖父。
- It's my dream to win a Nobel Prize.我的理想是获得诺贝尔奖。
- He volunteered to protect her as she looked so vulnerable. 她看上去很脆弱，他就主动去保护她。 来自《简明英汉词典》
- He volunteered to serve as the manager of our department store. 他自荐当我们商场的经理。 来自《现代汉英综合大词典》
- To serve the people is our duty.为人民服务是我们的本分。
- I decided to serve the church.我决心服务于教会。
- Which events is he going in for at the Olympics? 他将在奥运上参加什么项目？
- I think the Olympics will be a great success.我想奥运会将会是非常成功的。
- The internal structure of the Department is wondrous to behold.看一下国务院的内部结构是很有意思的。
- We were driven across this wondrous vast land of lakes and forests.我们乘车穿越这片有着湖泊及森林的广袤而神奇的土地。
- Pines have a very wide distribution. 松树的分布很广。 来自《简明英汉词典》
- Firs, spruces and pines are conifers. 冷杉、云杉和松树都是针叶树。 来自《简明英汉词典》
- The paths must be unique.路径必须是唯一的。
- This stamp is unique;there are no others like it.这张邮票是独一无二的，再也没有象这样的了。
- Are you interested in foreign languages? 你对外语感兴趣吗？
- To welcome our foreign friends. 欢迎我们的外国朋友。
- The foreigner was eating a hamburger.那个老外正在吃汉堡包。
- The man looks like a foreigner.那个人看起来像个外国人。
- Take the first turning on the left.在左边第一个转弯处拐弯。
- The leaves of the tree were turning yellow and red.树叶变成黄色和红色。
- He was worried about the safety of me.他为我的安全担心。
- He worried his father to buy a new car.他苦苦缠着父亲要买一辆新车。
- I am looking for the headphone jack.我正在找寻头戴式耳机插孔。
- He lifted the car with a jack to change the flat tyre.他用千斤顶把车顶起来换下瘪轮胎。
- The boy forgot where he put his textbook.那男孩忘记把课本放在什么地方了。
- I forgot how to do it.我忘记怎样做了。
- I took my dog for a walk along the river.我带着狗沿那条河散步。
- It took me about two hours to cook the meat.我花了大约两个小时来煮这些肉。
- It was just a thought.这仅仅是一个想法。
- She thought he had a cold.她认为他感冒了。
- She woke up with a terrible hangover. 她醒来时宿醉反应很厉害。
- I woke up covered in a rash. 我醒来时长了一身皮疹。
- He said to me that he could not come.他对我说他不能来。
- He said to his mother that he would do it by himself.他对他的母亲说他将自己独立做那件事。
- The hotel is famous for its suppers.那个酒店以晚餐而著称。
- He is famous for his learning.他以有学问而出名。
- He was accused of lies and deceit. 他被指控撒谎和欺诈。
- a drama full of lies and deception 充满谎言和欺骗的一出戏
- Foreigners take some time to adjust to our way of life. 外国人要花一些时间才能适应我们的生活方式。
- The emperor issued an edict forbidding doing trade with foreigners. 皇帝颁布了一项不得和外国人做生意的敕令。
- In a short while,the cat ate up the fish.不久，那只猫便将鱼吃个精光。
- He teaches English in the school all the while.他一直在这所学校里教英语。