时间:2018-12-01 作者:英语课 分类:英语作文


英语课

   明喻(simile 1)和暗喻(metaphor 2)都可以通过很强的画面感来传达思想。首先,我们分别看一看明喻和暗喻的例子。(明喻与暗喻定义及区别可以戳这里~)


  Her mind was like a balloon with static cling, attracting random 3 ideas as they floated by.
  她的头脑就像静电的气球,飘到哪儿,就吸引着哪儿的想法。
  Humor is the shock absorber of life; it helps us take action.
  幽默是生活的减震器,它可以鼓舞人们付诸于行动。
  明喻和暗喻不仅仅可以让我们的作文更加生动有趣,它们还体现了我们的思考方式。那么,应该如何写出优秀的比喻为作文增色?最重要的一点就是,我们要善于运用语言文字。
  举个例子,如果我们要说Laura的嗓音很难听,像一只老猫,写作新手会写出这样的句子:
  Laura sang like an old cat.
  这确实是一个比喻句,但却不是一个生动的比喻句。如何修改?我们可以增添一些细节,让比喻更有趣:
  When Laura sang, she sounded like a cat sliding down a chalkboard.
  劳拉唱歌的嗓音就像一只猫窜过黑板一样刺耳。
  对比这两个句子,你有什么发现?
  长度不同?
  是的,但这不是说句子写得越冗长效果就更好。第二句增添的内容是第一句中所没有的细节,描述了大家熟知的场景,十分生动,让读者仅仅看到文字就仿佛可以听到Laura刺耳的嗓音。
  我们再看一道练习题。
  George has been working at the same automobile 4 factory six days a week, ten hours a day, for the past twelve years.(Use a simile or a metaphor to show how worn out George was feeling.)
  过去12年里,乔治一直在一间汽车工厂上班,每周6天,每天10小时。(用比喻句表示乔治十分劳累。)
  可以这样说:
  George felt worn out, like an old punching bag in a neighbor's garage.
  乔治累得快垮了,就像邻居家那个破旧的拳击袋。
  这是一个明喻句,把乔治的疲劳程度与破旧拳击袋被压瘪的程度进行对比,生动形象。
  George felt worn out and useless--just another broken fan belt, a burst radiator 5 hose, a discharged battery.
  乔治累极了,还心生一股自我厌弃,觉得自己像一截破损的风扇带、一段烧坏的散热器软管、一块没电的电池。
  这是一个暗喻句,破损的风扇带、烧坏的散热器软管、没电的电池三个意象与乔治自我认定的无用感产生联系,形成比较。
  不知道看到这里你是否对怎样写出成功的比喻句形成了初步了解呢?用几个题目操练一下吧!
  场景一:
  Katie had been working all day in the summer sun.(Use a simile or a metaphor to show how hot and tired Katie was feeling.)
  凯蒂在烈日下工作了整整一天。(用比喻句表达出凯蒂的疲劳与所感受到的闷热)
  场景二:
  Victor spent his entire summer vacation watching quiz shows and soap operas on television.(Use a simile or a metaphor to describe the state of Victor's mind by the end of his vacation.)
  整个暑假,维克托都在电视上看智力竞猜节目和肥皂剧。(用比喻句描述收假时维克多的心情)
  场景三:
  After all the troubles of the past few weeks, Sandy felt peaceful at last.(Use a simile or a metaphor to describe how peaceful or relieved Sandy was feeling.)
  熬过了过去几周的痛苦,最终,桑迪感到内心平静。(用比喻句描述桑迪此刻的平静放松)
  大家有什么好的想法都可以积极表达哦~不过,有一点要注意的是,比喻就像糕点上的葡萄干,添加适量可以增色增味,但是添加过量,就会影响阅读。

1 simile
n.直喻,明喻
  • I believe this simile largely speaks the truth.我相信这种比拟在很大程度上道出了真实。
  • It is a trite simile to compare her teeth to pearls.把她的牙齿比做珍珠是陈腐的比喻。
2 metaphor
n.隐喻,暗喻
  • Using metaphor,we say that computers have senses and a memory.打个比方,我们可以说计算机有感觉和记忆力。
  • In poetry the rose is often a metaphor for love.玫瑰在诗中通常作为爱的象征。
3 random
adj.随机的;任意的;n.偶然的(或随便的)行动
  • The list is arranged in a random order.名单排列不分先后。
  • On random inspection the meat was found to be bad.经抽查,发现肉变质了。
4 automobile
n.汽车,机动车
  • He is repairing the brake lever of an automobile.他正在修理汽车的刹车杆。
  • The automobile slowed down to go around the curves in the road.汽车在路上转弯时放慢了速度。
5 radiator
n.暖气片,散热器
  • The two ends of the pipeline are connected with the radiator.管道的两端与暖气片相连接。
  • Top up the radiator before making a long journey.在长途旅行前加满散热器。
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