时间:2019-03-11 作者:英语课 分类:雅思英语


英语课

   雅思写作考试第二部分为大作文,要求学生在40 分钟内完成一篇字数最少为250字的议论文写作,对试卷提供的某些观点进行讨论,或者对某些社会现象问题进行分析。这个部分在整个写作考试中占时最久,评分所占比例最大,是很多考生一直苦恼如何顺利完成的部分,很多考生考前背诵了很多范文,却还是觉得难以下手;就算努力拼凑完成后,也不尽符合雅思考官的评分要求造成得分不理想。甚至很多已经在校通过大学四,六级的学生也觉得以前很多非常“有用”的写作套路,在这个部分也惨遭滑铁卢。



  可是,雅思作文真的是不可能完成的任务吗?为什么我们付出了大量的时间和精力,始终冲不过作文6分那根终点线呢?事实上,在很多考生准备过程中,可能根本没有了解或只有部分掌握雅思作文的写作标准与要求,进而白花了大把的力气(比如,机械的记忆大量雅思范文)。今天,我们根据一篇雅思8分范文,为大家揭开雅思作文的神秘面纱,看看一篇符合雅思标准的作文要那些“质量保证”。   You should spend about 40 minutes on this task and write at least 250 words.   Some people believe that students who go directlyfrom high school to university benefitless from their courses than those who take a job or travel in the “real world” before they enter the university. What is your opinion?   (本文属于教育类话题文章,在雅思考试中曾多次出现同话题文章,考生务必注意)   根据对题目的问话方式”what is your opinion?"的分析,本文属于陈述个人观点文章,重点在于提出个人观点并对此进行支持论证。这种类型的文章,在雅思考试中占一半以上,考生在准备考试时应该给予一定的重视。   考题第一句话为背景介绍。考生应该快速画出这句话中与论题(topic)相关的关键信息点(比如:who, what, where, when, why),并根据这些信息点进行对话题观点作出思考(brainstorming)。可以写出尽可能多的与这些关键字眼相关的其他的词语或参考常见的观点思考方向(比如:涉及人,可以考虑身体与精神方面),从而完成写作前的准备工作。为了节省写作时间和提高写作质量,要求考生一定要在写作前,根据观点的思考,写下提纲,中英文都可以。(这是根治写作中常见的“意识流”问题最好的方法。)   关键词语选择及扩展:   Students: high school students, college/university students, high school graduates, pupil, freshmanin a university, learner, etc.   High school: secondary education, middle school, etc.   University: college, higher education, further education, institution, etc.   Before they enter the university: gapyear, before college years, before getting enrolled 1 in university, etc.   Take a job: obtain working experience, get employment, work in a company, hand-on experience, etc.   Course: subject, major, classroom learning, school life, academiclearning, etc.   例文如下:   Nowadays most students start their higher education immediately after their graduation from high school.(描述现状,一部分学生情况)However, some people think that students shall benefit more from their courses if they work for some time to obtain some hand-on experience before they enter university.(转述另一种学生情况)【以上两句可以通过对题目背景句改写完成】Personally, I think they are right.(论题句,交待个人观点)   开头段主要用于交代讨论话题,表明作者观点。建议考生最好最有效的方法就是开门见山,点到即可。具体的论述可以留在主体段扩展。注意,这段是考官必读段,也是第一印象。第一印象有时就是最后印象,所以一定注意这个段落的语言正确性。也可以适当注意语言的地道表达,建议准备一些比较好的表达观点的地道的表达,比如名词性从句,被动语态等(e.g. It is claimed that+观点)。   由于篇幅有限,在本次文章中就先对此题如果开头作了详细的例证,那么如何发展和深入自己的观点,将会在后面的文章中逐步展开。



adj.入学登记了的v.[亦作enrol]( enroll的过去式和过去分词 );登记,招收,使入伍(或入会、入学等),参加,成为成员;记入名册;卷起,包起
  • They have been studying hard from the moment they enrolled. 从入学时起,他们就一直努力学习。 来自《简明英汉词典》
  • He enrolled with an employment agency for a teaching position. 他在职业介绍所登了记以谋求一个教师的职位。 来自《简明英汉词典》
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acoust-
ajudged
antedation
Aquamycetin
armillary sphere
as swift as an arrow
assault area
barium complex
Bhutanthera
Bickleton
big inch pipe
blood-letter
brush cutter
bua (mbua)
burchards
Burumburum
buyo
cargo liquid line
chrysostomos
circule-
come to the boil
coureurs
devitalizes
die approach
diode baseling restorer
directed-energy warfare
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dorito
dosimetrician
each and every
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exclusive trail car
factory model
fending groyne
fish-eaters
flanking attack
forecast of business condition
freakouts
fresh news
fur stole
gear-sticks
herb mercury
high level network service
hyonatremia
intelligent data network
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La Cuevita
lanthanium
libidinously
linear inequality in one variable
lithotomy knives
loading disk
Lugansk
Lukeman
maccanico
Membrana stapedialis
methoxya-cetanilide
mining in installments
Neopyrithiamine
Nodi lymphatici retropharyngeales
novak djokovic
obama
off on wave generator
out-cycle work
outpacking
paxital
pneumatic pressure tank
podzol soil
pole fitness
polystenohaline species
power shift
rapid return motion
rapid start
recoverin
resistance coefficient 1
round on
Saxifraga dshagalensis
screw drive
security fire door
socio-racist
sorbitan oleate
source
space guide rod
speechamplifier
springing of carbolate
stone land
surge check valve
tank regulator
thwartships bulkhead
tinctumutation
top-quality bend
trophic factor
type-writer
unsanitarinesses
viviani
Volyňka
Waddington, Mt.
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winder trim
xiphisternal joints
Yezhikha